What message do I want my reader to have? (highlight)
Virtual tours of a zoo isn't as fun as a real zoo - Whitebait fritters
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Disappointed when Mr Goodwin said we are going to the zoo then he said click on the link
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Not as exciting then the real zoo
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explaining that I prefer going in real life
What I think about the San Diego zoo
Yay we get to go to the zoo but this time it’s online. Virtual zoos for me aren't as cool I would rather real life because we can actually touch them. How would you feel if it happened to you?
We planned a recount for our virtual zoo tour. We wrote two and re-crafted one .We ended by planning at the start and marking myself on a rubric.