Tuesday, 3 March 2015

River talks.

WALT: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Our polluted dirty brown creek.
Years ago children played and swam in omaru creek but now it is filled with cigarettes and rubbish . Will you please help us clean it?

I had to write and introduction  with both simple and complex sentences plus a question
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