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Thursday 23 July 2015

One million dollars!

Walt: write effective paragraphs using juicy and exciting words.

If you had just won the lotto for one million dollars what would you buy? If I had a million dollars I wouldn't have to look at how much  products cost , because come on  you have a million dollars so there is no use. I would buy anything especially from toy world , JB hifi or the movies check this out.

At toy world I would buy a nerf gun to prank my friends, a long board to skate around the blocks and last but not least I would also get a giant minion because they are so cool. Toy world is the best toy shop because they have a genres of toys as in superheroes and sports. Those are the main things I would buy from toy world.

At JB Hi fi I would buy and I phone, a Samsung galaxy S5, following with 6 Chromebooks with  wireless mice, 3 of those 60 inch TVs and 5 speakers. My room will be overloaded with electronics. I may dream big but it could happen one day.

At the movies I would just go to the cinemas deluxe to watch all the movies that are  on that day. I would buy all their lollies , popcorn  , drinks and ice cream. The movie I would want to watch the most is Jurassic world because I have seen it and now it’s my new favourite movie. This is what I will buy when I win the lotto.

Although if a kid has a million dollars then they are gonna spend it all in one day. If I was financially responsible I would devote money to charities that help cancer because cancer is my enemy and other personal reasons. Because I will contribute a - lot of money I will most likely have money left and other reasons or things I would do is I would help my parents with rent and to pay bills. These are very good reasons to help problems and viruses.

It was hard to be financially responsible even while thinking of it. In this task we were asked to use exciting words as well as juicy ones. We also had to imagine being selfish with 10 truckloads of money.

2 comments:

  1. good work Cameo I like how you stated with exciting words that starting made me read the whole paragraph. If I had a million dollars I would buy a lot of thing's. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!! :)

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  2. good work Cameo I like how you stated with exciting words that starting made me read the whole paragraph. If I had a million dollars I would buy a lot of thing's. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!! :)

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