San diego zoo

Walt: think about the purpose and my reader by planning my recount

Purpose:

What message do I want my reader to have? (highlight)

Virtual tours of a zoo isn't as fun as a real zoo - Whitebait fritters

Plan of my paragraph topics

1. Introduction	Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1	Disappointed when Mr Goodwin said we are going to the zoo then he said click on the link
3. Body Paragraph 2	Not as exciting then the real zoo
4. Body Paragraph 3	explaining that I prefer going in real life
5. Conclusion	What I think about the San Diego zoo

Yay we get to go to the zoo but this time it’s online. Virtual zoos for me aren't as cool I would rather real life because we can actually touch them. How would you feel if it happened to you?

We planned a recount for our virtual zoo tour. We wrote two and re-crafted one .We ended by planning at the start and marking myself on a rubric.